Stomp stomp stomp. My shoes echo in the hallway as me and Arely race to the door. I hear the piter- pater of the rest of the class far behind us, we stop to catch our breath and Erick walks up to the window, gazing into the class room. Then, BANG Arely was quick to push Erick’s face into the window. We started to laugh and Erick hid his face behind his folder and I made arely say sorry. After there was a small mark he left on the glass due to the oil on his forehead.
It was a foggy night me and my girlfriend were out on a date in my fathers car. We haven’t gone far, a few feet ahead a car stopped in front of us, that car was stalled, the engine was dead. I couldn’t stop so I swirled right. I will never forget the sounds that night. The screeching tires and the glass had burst and the panful scream that I heard last. When I woke up the rain poured down on me, people stood all around. Some how I got a hold of my baby that night. I lifted her head and she looked at me and said “ hold me darling just a little while.” I held her close and I kissed her our last kiss, well now she’s gone even though I held her tight, I lost the love of my life that night. She’s gone to heaven so I’ve got to be good so I can see my baby whe I leave this world. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J_sEtNrYlC4
Great SOL1, I look forward to reading more of these this month!
ReplyDeleteWow.. that must’ve hurt. Great job on making your SOL hope to read more a bit like this one.
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